I don’t wanna be old,
and feel it fade,
I wanna be bold,
and unafraid.
When the days are laced,
with your face,
and the years are wrapped,
around my neck.
When deterioration has begun,
I’d rather die young.
I don’t wanna be old,
and count the days,
until we unite again.
I wanna go home,
and hold your hand,
stop missing you old friend.
I’m spinning around,
out of control,
I’m hiding inside,
I make no sound,
I’m slow on my feet,
but fast on the ground,
I can’t pull myself up,
I am earthbound.
And if I could give anything at all,
I would give it all away,
and if I had the chance,
I wouldn’t grow older than today.
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About this poem:
First off: Don’t worry, I am okay and not depressed. I hadn’t even planned on writing today (Do I ever?! No.).
Do you know this song “Atlantic” by Keane? In this song he sings “I don’t wanna be old” and I just couldn’t get this line out of my head today. I knew my brain was going to come up with something from this line, because the moment I heard it there was this tingly feeling I always get when inspiration is going to strike. Obviously my mind wouldn’t stop singing the poem above to the melody of “Atlantic” until I finally gave in, grabbed a pen and started to write. Ahh.. silence. Now, I can finally get some sleep.
Good night.
Prospermind. 🙂
You can really feel the emotion in this piece
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Then, I am proud that I have achieved the highest goal a writer could ever hope to achieve.
This is also why I began this blog, to touch and to reach someone out there through my words. Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Wow, I literally read the first line and though “this reminds me of Keane” 🙂 it’s great to find a fellow Keane enthusiast!!
Lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you!! How awesome that you immediately thought of Keane, nice to know a fellow fan. 😀
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‘When the days are laced,
with your face,
and the years are wrapped,
around my neck’
BEAUTIFUL 🙂
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I am SO happy you think so. Thanks for stopping by old friend.
I hope you’re well and you’re enjoying the last days of 2016. Sending lots of love you way. 🙂
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Thank you dear poet! And you too 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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😊😊😊
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Love that song, love this poem 😉
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🙂
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Another grand piece youngman, question,
would she be the other part of your little family?
ifinn so, charming couple…
Sweet dividing love chris….
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Many many thanks friend. I appreciate you taking the time to say so.
Be well.
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One can’t ignore brilliance…
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