Sometimes,
I feel like an evil,
Succubus,
Who sucks all,
What’s good,
Out of life,
And then,
Writes it down,
Just to taste,
Past moments,
Twice.
Sometimes,
I feel like a lonely,
Angel,
Who came down,
From the clouds above,
Because he,
Wants to fit in,
But doesn’t belong,
Who’s trying to sing,
Life’s lonesome,
Song.
Sometimes,
I feel like a sad,
Soul,
Who’s forgotten,
How to find this thing,
You all call “joy”,
Like someone who thinks,
Life is just a game,
And a heart is just,
A toy.
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This poem is part of the project Daily Dispatch.
About the poem:
I have started to write several darker pieces today. However the poem above seems to be the only one, that made it all the way from start to finish on this rainy Tuesday.
Wherever you are and whatever the circumstances, let’s always pick up our pens and write our way through the day.
See you soon,
prospermind.
Reblogged this on One Word Whispers.
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This is really nice
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Thank you! 🙂
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🙂
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I love the concept of this dark poem 👍
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Thank you Nicole! 🙂
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I love this poem!
And I spent the better part of the last 3 hours working on something. I’m not completely happy with it, but I don’t have time for more.
At least I picked up my pen today, put the time aside to do it, even if I’ll probably pay for it tomorrow 😉
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Thank you very much Dawn!
Oh, I know the feeling, this is how I feel about today’s post. Oh well, it’s good to know that the world doesn’t end because of one bad post. Even though I’m not happy with it, I am happy that I posted it anyways! 🙂
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I will try to find time to go read it, but I’m sure it’s not nearly as bad as you think! 🙂
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Beautiful Dark,truthful, enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing this.
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Many thanks Joel!
Best wishes. 🙂
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You’re welcome and best wishes too.
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Brilliant! Dark indeed but I love dark ❤
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Ohhh, thank you very much Nat! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it. Welcome to the dark side! 😉
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The dark side and I have been acquaintances for quite a while now 😉
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Wonderful write. Darkness is such a huge part of life. Like House said, “Life is pain”. I don’t think that all of life is pain, but living in a lost and fallen world definitely, most definitely includes it. A lot of the time.
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Thank you Staci!
Yes, there is truth in what House said. Life wouldn’t be the same without some pain here and there. Pain is how we learn and grow.
I hope you’re well.
Best wishes! 😉
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Well said, my friend. I hope you are well too. And I hope your mom is well. Is she?
🙂
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my post on “A Life of Happiness and Fulfillment.” I’m glad you liked it. Have you considered enrolling?
Jerry
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My pleasure. Even through I wouldn’t mind taking a course on that matter, I think I have to pass on the offer due to university exams. However I think I’ll stop by your place ever now and then to check out your notes on the topic.
Be well. 🙂
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I look forward to seeing your comments on my happiness class experience. Good luck on your exams.
Jerry
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Thank you Jerry! I’ll be checking them out every now and then! 😉
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