No,
I gotta stop.
Stop.
Stop.
Stop.
To stab,
your knife,
straight,
into my heart.
Can’t,
can’t take,
what your memory,
does to me.
No,
I gotta stop.
Stop.
Stop.
Stop.
To look for you,
’cause I can’t,
I can’t have you,
anymore.
So,
you gotta stop.
Stop.
Stop.
Stop.
Haunting me,
taunting me,
hurting me,
please, baby stop.
Oh,
oh, can’t you see?
All your wounds,
on my chest, how much they bleed?
No,
I gotta stop.
Stop.
Stop.
Stop.
To take you with me,
to carry you everywhere I go,
before you drain my heart,
before I fall apart.
No,
I gotta stop.
Stop.
Stop.
Stop.
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Wow you can really feel this from the depths of your soul. Is that you in the photo. If it is you are a very attractive women.
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Ohhhh if you could see the huge grin on my face right now, I bet it would infect you right away. 😀
No, this isn’t me in the photo, because I’m a guy. 😀
Many thanks for your kind words and cheering me up. You’re great!! 🙂
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(OMG… I laugh out loud) 😛
Please, don’t disappear, OK? I don’t want to lose you!
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Hahaha, oh I know you did! 😀
No, don’t worry. I’m planning on sticking around. I’ve already created an extra blog for whatever crosses my way in Shanghai. I’ll send you the link to it later via email as promised (I didn’t forget!).
Tia, you’re so sweet my well-bred girl with a trucker’s mouth! ❤ 😀
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OMFG!! It’s the best compliment 😀
(I can’t wait to press ‘follow’ on your new blog!)
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Yess!! Well done prosper.. I mean: I’m glad you like it. 😀
Haha, I’m curious to see if I can manage two blogs or not. Time will tell I guess. 😀
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Oh… damn! I always wonder how Tony can manage 4 blogs! 😯
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Riiiight??!?! Like I said before on one of his poems: He’s a man of many talents! Let’s not forget, that managing skills are a great talent, too. 😀
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Hee hee hee… I would say it rather circus art 😛
Kinda juggling 😀
By the way, do you know his photo-blog and his art-blog?
(I can give links)
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Yes, I’m following his photo blog and his blog where he publishes his artwork. Great stuff. I’m quite glad to know him, as he keeps impressing me over and over again.
(Btw: check your mail!) 😀
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lol Ok is this the one you are pinning for? I’m pleased that I cheered you up.
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No, it’s just a random image I found fitting for this post. 🙂
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Hope it is not somebody’s girlfriend. It won’t be a friendly knock at your door lol
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Haha, I suppose that wouldn’t be the nicest visit. It would be a little funny though. 😀
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Yes it would. You would be writing quite a different poem. So was it another girl you were writing about?
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Oh, I bet!
Yes, it wasn’t her, it was someone else I was writing about. The image is from deviantart, as are most of the images I selected to go along with my poetry. 🙂
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It was a good match
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Many thanks. 🙂
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If you are bored in China, you can take my email down in case you can’t get on wordpress. We can throw the poetry back and forth or chat. thespiritkeepers@yahoo.com
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I wrote it down already. Yes, I’d be happy to do so. Sounds great!
I’ve created another blog to write a little about my traveling experiences in China. This blog is still in its “experimental” phase, but I’d be happy to share it with you and send you a link via email. 🙂
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Please do send the link. I hear and I have seen pictures of China that are so beautiful. I can do without the smog in big cities that look like fogs with everyone covering their mouths while walking in this. I would just move. Look forward to your blog.
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I love this so. Resonates so much with me. Great piece!
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Thank you very much Caroline! I’m glad my words spoke to you.
Best wishes to you. 🙂
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I had a big grin on my face reading his comment exchange. I would love to read your blog about china too, see how they compare to my own experiences there. You know how to find my email address, don’t you?
As for this post… all I want to do is ((HUGS))!
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I’m still smiling about it. (And yes. That’s not the first time this happened. It’s happened before.) 😀
I always appreciate a nice (or multiple) hug(s)! Thank you Dawn, you’re increcible!!! 🙂
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I should state that my keyboard is sometimes playing up and that Ts in particular are a problem. My comment should have read *this comment* not *his* 😦
I guess it’s in keeping with the thread of conversation though, the mix of genres 😉
Wow! Incredible? Thank you for making feel good!
Let me send more hugs then 😉
XOXO
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Haha, oh Dawn. Your keyboard is great the way it is, its imperfection cheered me up and made me smile. As we know, nobody is perfect, not even keyboards. 😛
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Not even keyboards, that’s so right! 🙂
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Emotional piece. Pulled on those heartstrings. Well done
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Many thanks for such an incredible comment. 🙂
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Let me know if you figure out how to stop..stop..stop. I can’t even yield.
Great poem.
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I wish I knew how to stop. If I figure it out, I’ll let you know..
Thank you for your kind comment Tosha! 🙂
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Nice work though!
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Thanks so much!!! :))
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😀
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