When you cry

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When you cry,
my heart it aches,
and slowly falls apart inside.

When you cry,
the bond we share,
lets me feel the pain you hide.

When you cry,
I can barely look at you,
without tasting your salty lines.

I know, you’re afraid to die,
but don’t you dare,
to go down this road.
Ma petite chère.

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19 comments ›

  1. stacilys
    March 22, 2015 • 7:41 pm

    This is sad and touching.
    ❤

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  2. impostorpawn
    March 22, 2015 • 7:43 pm

    love the connectivity between narrator and subject.very endearing.

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  3. woundstofeel
    March 22, 2015 • 9:45 pm

    Beautifully tragic.

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  4. Tony Single
    March 22, 2015 • 11:57 pm

    You big ol’ softy you! 😉

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  5. Violet
    March 25, 2015 • 3:25 pm

    Heartfelt and simply said ❤

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  6. Poetsmith
    April 21, 2015 • 8:48 am

    A lovely heart! When you can empathise with someone’s feelings… 🙂

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  7. viladev
    May 19, 2015 • 5:35 am

    Beautiful and romantic, when you really care about someone you love

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  8. Nina Karadzic
    July 12, 2015 • 3:34 pm

    Salty lines..love❤️💫💫

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  9. Eliza
    July 16, 2015 • 12:38 pm

    I really like this. It’s so sad though, it almost hurts to read it (but that’s why I like it).

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